Here is a link to my classmate’s
blog.
I agree with Jennifer’s
statement. I think that everything has two sides, positive and negative. For
example, the internet has many benefits, such as saving our time, providing us
with necessary information, being a communicating tool and providing us with convenience.
However, it has some negative sides, such as social media addiction, limited
thinking, laziness, game addiction and bullying. It is difficult to imagine ourselves
without the internet, but we need some time to look at ourselves without being
distracted by the internet. I think that living without TV, cell phone, computer
and internet for a few days may help us to think deeply and to look at
ourselves differently.
Good job on taking an external view and refitting it to serve your viewpoint. Strong argument which supports the overall tone of your work.
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